Help with translation

Hello!

French language beginner here. Last Valentines, my cool French professor asked us to write an open love letter to our special someone. I just wanna check if I got the grammar right.

So I want to say "I am everything I hoped for in this world when I am with you,"

Was I right when I wrote:

"Je suis tout ce que j'espérais dans ce monde quand je suis avec toi."???

Merci beaucoup!

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EducatorPermalink Reply by George Hunt on February 20, 2015 at 12:10pm

That looks perfect to me .

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Permalink Reply by Vedas on February 20, 2015 at 1:23pm

Hello,

"Je suis tout ce que j'espérais dans ce monde quand je suis avec toi

in a more formal (but also natural) style you could have:

Tout ce dont j'aspirai à être (ici bas) je le réalise à tes côtés.

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