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Anna aime Jules. Elle aime son doux sein, son sens des responsabilites, sa force de caractere, son amour pour elle...

What I meant to say :

Anna loves Jules. She loves his warm arms, his sense responsability, his force of character, his love for her...in short she loves his strength.

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Permalink Reply by hmoun on December 15, 2009 at 5:46pm

anna aime jules. Elle aime ses bras réconfortants, son sens des responsabilités, sa force de caractère, son amour pour elle...elle aime tout simplement sa force.