does this sentence make sense? a kid learning french needs some help

I'm doing a project for one of my french classes and I'm still having trouble constructing logical sentences. Could anyone tell me if the following sentence makes sense?

Ils pensent que c’est impossible faisaient un film aparté de parti pris artistique.

My project is over cinéma vérité and the sentence I'm trying to write should say something like:

They (critics of cinéma vérité) think it's impossible to make a film without artistic bias.

Thank you for your time!

I hope I put this in the right category.

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Permalink Reply by lauris on April 28, 2011 at 9:10am

Hi!

You have just two mistakes in your sentence :

1 - Ils pensent que c'est impossible de faire : you need infinitive after using another verb. Here you say "c'est" so "faire" should be use with infinitive.

2 - un film sans parti pris artistique : the translation of without is quite simple actually, "sans" is enought. "Aparté" is a noun (maybe it can be something else I'm not totally sure) which means that you talk to someone without somebody else to here you.

Hope that helped you

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Permalink Reply by Sandrine on April 28, 2011 at 10:27am

It's more like..

- Ils pensent que c'est impossible de/qu'il est impossible de faire/réaliser un film sans "artistic bias" (I'm sorry, I did'nt find the real meaning of "bias" in french)