Aide moi s'il vous plait!

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Permalink Reply by Frank on August 28, 2009 at 7:55pm

Last summer, I've been working in Januik Winery, Woodinville. I was serving food and wine.
For a quarter of July, I've been traveling to Whidbey Island. I ate a lot and launched fireworks with my family.
Next spring, I'll go to France. So please let me take this class.

(don't hesitate to correct my English as well...)

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Permalink Reply by Katie Lane on August 28, 2009 at 7:58pm

I actually need my french fixed please . I'm sure I made some errors!

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Permalink Reply by Katie Lane on August 28, 2009 at 8:02pm

For English corrections it should be

Last summer I was working at januik winery in woodinville.

For the fourth of july (that was my bad on the french) I travelled to Whidbey Island.

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Permalink Reply by Frank on August 28, 2009 at 8:11pm

L’été dernier je travaillais à Januik Winery dans Woodinville. Je y servais la nourriture et le vin. Pour le quartre de julliet j’ai voyage au Whidbey Island. J’ai mangé beacoup et allumé les petards avec ma famille. Le printemps prochaine j'irai au France! Alors, j’éspere que vous me permettez de séjourner dans cette classe.

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L'été dernier, je travaillais pour Januik Winery à Woodinville. J'y servais la nourriture et le vin.

Pendant un quart du mois de Juillet, j'ai visité Whidbey Island. J'ai beaucoup mangé et lancé des feux d'artifices avec ma famille.

Au printemps prochain, j'irai en France !

Alors j'espère que vous me permettrez de suivre ce cours.

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Thanks a million for your English corrections Katie!

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Permalink Reply by Katie Lane on August 29, 2009 at 2:11am

Anytime! You are always so helpful, glad I could return the favor for once

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