Homework help!!! :( - French Language2024-03-28T13:11:41Zhttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/forum/topics/homework-help-1?commentId=3179028%3AComment%3A97903&feed=yes&xn_auth=noBon jour! Je m'appelle Tonic…tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2012-11-29:3179028:Comment:978642012-11-29T05:06:59.803ZCharles Dhttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/CharlesD
<p>Bon jour! Je m'appelle Tonic et je porte une ensemble qui est inspire (accent on the 'e') par le printemps français: la chemise est bleu avec un mode floral, et la jupe marron est une mini. (This last part might be written as 'la mini-jupe est marron') Les chaussures a talons sont noires. Je porte aussi un long cardigan noir sur toute l'ensemble. Merci et bonne journée.</p>
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<p>To explain: Having already stated that you are wearing the outfit, you go on to describe the outfit. I…</p>
<p>Bon jour! Je m'appelle Tonic et je porte une ensemble qui est inspire (accent on the 'e') par le printemps français: la chemise est bleu avec un mode floral, et la jupe marron est une mini. (This last part might be written as 'la mini-jupe est marron') Les chaussures a talons sont noires. Je porte aussi un long cardigan noir sur toute l'ensemble. Merci et bonne journée.</p>
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<p>To explain: Having already stated that you are wearing the outfit, you go on to describe the outfit. I don't think you need to keep saying "my" in referring to the articles of clothing. I think you should keep it simple; you repeat yourself:</p>
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<p>"My top is a blue shirt" = "The shirt is blue" If you like the English word 'top' as franglais then 'la top est blue' is sufficient.</p>
<p>"My skirt is a brown mini-skit" = this can be simply said in two ways: 'The brown skirt is a mini' or The mini-skirt is brown.'</p>
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<p>a talons implies high heels the way une mini implies a mini-skirt. I don't think 'haut' is necessary at all.</p> Hello, here are my (small) co…tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2012-11-28:3179028:Comment:979032012-11-28T16:25:07.767ZNausikaahttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/Nausikaa
<p>Hello, here are my (small) corrections:</p>
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<p><span><span style="text-decoration: underline;">bonne journée</span>! <strong>Bonjour</strong> ("bonne journée" is only used as a "goodbye") mon nom est Tonic et <span style="text-decoration: underline;">i et portant</span> <strong>je porte</strong> (I'm guessing the "i" is a typo because I have no idea what you mean by that, for the "je porte", as you're wearing the outfit you can use the present tense)…</span></p>
<p>Hello, here are my (small) corrections:</p>
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<p><span><span style="text-decoration: underline;">bonne journée</span>! <strong>Bonjour</strong> ("bonne journée" is only used as a "goodbye") mon nom est Tonic et <span style="text-decoration: underline;">i et portant</span> <strong>je porte</strong> (I'm guessing the "i" is a typo because I have no idea what you mean by that, for the "je porte", as you're wearing the outfit you can use the present tense) <span style="text-decoration: underline;">un costume</span> <strong> </strong>("costume" means costume in the halloween/carnival sense, or tuxedo, so I hope that's what you're going for) inspiré du (I can't really make up my mind whether "du" is correct here or not, I think that "par le" is ok as well, but I have no grammatical explanation for this, "du" should work fine) printemps en France. mon <span style="text-decoration: underline;">top</span> <strong>haut</strong> ("top" is used in young fashion stores or magazines, but is borrowed from english, "haut" is the proper french word) est une chemise bleue <span style="text-decoration: underline;">floral</span> <strong>à fleurs</strong> ("floral" works if you want to say "à motifs floraux" wich means "a floral pattern" but talking about an item of clothing "à fleurs" is fine and more usual) . Ma jupe est une mini-jupe marron. mes chaussures sont noires <strong>à</strong> talons hauts. Je porte un long cardigan noir sur ma tenue. merci et bonne journée!</span></p>
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<p><span>As you can see I didn't have much to say about it, it is mainly perfectly ok, except for a few small things. :)</span></p>
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