Check out my poem (parody) - French Language2024-03-29T00:14:03Zhttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/forum/topics/check-out-my-poem-parody?commentId=3179028%3AComment%3A131084&feed=yes&xn_auth=noYou are quite welcome.tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2018-04-29:3179028:Comment:1310882018-04-29T16:05:05.390ZGeorge Hunthttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/GEORDIEHOUND
<p>You are quite welcome.</p>
<p>You are quite welcome.</p> thank you guys I appreciate y…tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2018-04-29:3179028:Comment:1312102018-04-29T15:53:21.718ZLiXiQinghttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/LiXiQing
<p>thank you guys I appreciate your assistance</p>
<p>thank you guys I appreciate your assistance</p> It's a nice poem. If you didn…tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2018-04-27:3179028:Comment:1310842018-04-27T22:13:44.507ZChantal Savignathttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/ChantalSavignat
<p>It's a nice poem. If you didn't say it's a parody I didn't think it's one.</p>
<p>to have sense : yes the whole poem has sense.</p>
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<p>it's easier to say "ma belle demoiselle" and it's more usual. But "ma belle mademoiselle" is right. And with demoiselle or with mademoiselle, there are 10 syllables.</p>
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<p>count syllable : 1 - 3 and 4 have 10 but 2 has only 9.</p>
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<p><span><em>que j’fixe!</em></span> sounds odd. But the idea and the sense with soleil - lune and…</p>
<p>It's a nice poem. If you didn't say it's a parody I didn't think it's one.</p>
<p>to have sense : yes the whole poem has sense.</p>
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<p>it's easier to say "ma belle demoiselle" and it's more usual. But "ma belle mademoiselle" is right. And with demoiselle or with mademoiselle, there are 10 syllables.</p>
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<p>count syllable : 1 - 3 and 4 have 10 but 2 has only 9.</p>
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<p><span><em>que j’fixe!</em></span> sounds odd. But the idea and the sense with soleil - lune and eclipse are very good.</p>
<p></p> I think
"Ils sont la Lune "…tag:www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk,2018-04-26:3179028:Comment:1310802018-04-26T10:55:06.863ZGeorge Hunthttp://www.forum.french-linguistics.co.uk/profile/GEORDIEHOUND
<p>I think </p>
<p>"Ils sont la Lune " would have to be "<strong>Ce</strong><span><em> so</em></span><span><em>nt</em></span><span> </span><span><em>la Lune...." </em>anyway.</span></p>
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<p><span>Not sure if you could use "ma belle 'demoiselle" (maybe a bit of a joke as it is also a kind of fish_</span></p>
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<p><span>Don't ask me for poetry arrangements. I don't have that in the cupboard....</span></p>
<p>I think </p>
<p>"Ils sont la Lune " would have to be "<strong>Ce</strong><span><em> so</em></span><span><em>nt</em></span><span> </span><span><em>la Lune...." </em>anyway.</span></p>
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<p><span>Not sure if you could use "ma belle 'demoiselle" (maybe a bit of a joke as it is also a kind of fish_</span></p>
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<p><span>Don't ask me for poetry arrangements. I don't have that in the cupboard....</span></p>